HALLOWEEN: COMPETITION FOR THE SPOOKIEST STORY AT EOI XATIVA
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As promised, here's the new entry for the scariest story ever written for HALLOWEEN at school.
GUIDELINES:
1)Write your scary story to post on this blog so that everybody can read it.
2) It should be about 150-200 words long.
3)Deadline: Friday 9th, Nov.
4)Click on the link below for vocabulary that will set the mood for your story.
5) And... just have fun!!!!
Vocabulary words for writing scary stories
Some years ago, when I was a teenager, in the high School, my friends and I decided to play Ouija in our break time.
ResponderEliminarWe went to the bathroom and closed the door, while opening the game board on the floor. This was a different Ouija, because we could talk with live people, not just with those who had already died.
At that time a friends of mine had a secret relationship with an older boy, and she was worried because she thought that he was cheating or in love with another girl, so we decided to contact with his subconscious and asked about it.
When we were focused on the game, suddenly someone knocked on the door. It was the head of studies and she was very angry because we had locked in the bathroom at break time. She asked us to please get out immediately from the bathroom, so we had to stop the game quickly and get out.
The problem about that was to finish the game se needed to follow a few guidelines like ask his subconscious if we could finish the game, because if this was not done in this way the person who was we playing could suffer a serious accident.
We were very worried about what could happen to the boy, since we couldn’t finish the game properly.
The school day ends and we went to our home. The next day we received the news that that boy had suffered a serious motorcycle accident and he was in hospital.
Fortunately he recovered; this was a big shock for us, so we never went back to playing the Ouija.
oh my god!! What a creepy story, Mabel!
Eliminarthanks a lot.
Here are some MISTAKES you made:
ALIVE people.
a friend of mine.
we had locked OUT.
She asked us to KINDLY get out... immediately OF the bathroom.... to stop the game quickly and GOT OUT.
SO we needed to follow....... the person who was playing could suffer...
..and we went HOME.
Next day we HEARD that the boy .......
we never PLAYED THE OUIJA AGAIN.
It happened in a rainy night. The car of a young couple broke in a lonely road, so they decided to ask for help in the first house that they found. They saw a crabbed small one. It was plenty of creepers that didn´t allow them to know the real colour of the walls. Before they had rung the doorbell, the main gate opened and they were able to meet the weird owner. A mysterious elderly woman invited them to have dinner and to phone someone later on. A dense red soup was eaten by everybody when a putrid smell was perceived by the couple. When they finished, they asked for the phone and they were guided to the basement. It was grimy and it was difficult to find the phone there. When they got it, they noticed that it didn´t work. Suddenly, the door closed. They yelled at the owner and tried to open the door, again and again. Unexpectedly, they discovered in one of the corners human skeletons. They fell sick. In that moment they were able to understand…they will be the ingredients of the following soup.
ResponderEliminarSo scary!!.. I was just reading it and I could imagine everything that was going on there!!
EliminarWell done!!
Just a few mistakes you should take into account:
ON a rainy night.
the car o a young couple broke DOWN ON AN ISOLATED road.
They saw a SMALL SHABBY one.
THERE was plenty of creepers.
AT that moment.
"Milk, almonds and black expensive Colombian chocolat." Being the only incoming in a house with 6 persons makes you to adjust allways your budget to the max, however buying this chocolat is worth as that will make my cake so special as the one in the Viane Rocher Chocolaterie’s shop window.
ResponderEliminarToday I am really excited as this morning was very special. Finally at breakfast, she tasted the candies that I had copied from the movie where Juliette Binoche cooked to win Jonny Deep’s love. I’m conscious about my shyness with them, so I usually turn to films for notice me. Hopefully, with my patience and my cookies, she will become my Viane Rocher.
Now it is late, so I must hurry up in picking the purchase. I still have to go home and prepare their dinner, review their locks and adjust well the gags. I always end up healing their ulcers as they have not yet learned that only me will give them a really movie’s life.
Tonight is the premier of another romantic movie, so once the chocolate cake will be ready for tomorrow and before going to the cinema I will turn off the lights and I will give a fragile goodnight kiss to my artists: "Goodnight my Amelie, goodnight my Satine, goodnight my Anna Scott, goodnight my Vivian, goodnight my Latika..."
HARD TO BELIVE? BUT IT HAPPENDED TO ME...
ResponderEliminarThis happened to me seventeen years ago. I bought a new film camera and I was looking forward to use it. There was on Sundays a fantastic flea market in Plaza Redonda in Valencia.
I spent a long time taking photos around the market, there were a lot of stalls selling an endless rarity things everywhere. After a while, I found a beautiful image: a pretty black woman in a stall of African things. Quickly I pulled the camera out, I aimed at her and shot it. That's it! But, suddenly the woman looked at me furious and disappeared.
Shortly after I tried to take another photo when I realized that the new camera was dead. I was amazed by the fact.
Monday morning I went to the camera shop and left it for repair and took the film out for processing. You wouldn't be surprised if I'll tell you that I have all the photos except the African woman. A week after, the technician wasn't able to understand what had happened with the camera and they gave me another new.
I wonder if she knew really the reach of her mind... Or do you think was a coincidence?
Nieves L.
(short version 199 words)
Hi classmates!
ResponderEliminarI want to tell you about the terrifying story of my friend. It happened two or three years ago.
My friend lives in a third floor in a central neighbourhood of Valencia. That’s why, I think this story is very interesting because it doesn’t be a typical story about an abandoned house when paranormal phenomena happen.
Well, let’s continue. She was on her own in house because her parents had gone to spend some days in the countryside. One night, she came back home really tired after work and she went to sleep immediately. When she took a long hours sleeping, suddenly she woke up and she saw a human shape in front of her door. It was crossing to another room. Her reaction was weird because she didn’t scream, she didn’t call anybody, she only covered her head with the sheets on the bed, she didn’t move to make no noise and she tried sleeping again. I couldn’t have done that! What fear!
Next morning, she was worried and she called me. She spoke whispering and I decided going to her house. To my amazement, when I arrived she was shivering and I tried to calm down. I have to say my friend has never been a cowardly person and seeing her that way was surprising for me.
I’m not sure if actually she saw it or she was dreaming – is the best hypothesis, isn’t it? –, but for her that “being” was real.
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ResponderEliminarThis story happened to me two years ago. My friends and I had never believed in ghost stories before and we enjoyed to watch horror films together.
ResponderEliminarTwo years ago at Halloween night, my friends and I went to my friend Tony’s grandma’s house, a small lonely house in the middle of the tenebrous forest. Tony’s grandma had died five years ago in that place.
We were going to spend that night there and to watch the “Paranormal Activity” terror film. It was about a family that had recorded a video while they were sleeping and paranormal experiences happened. When the movie finished a friend decided to record ourselves like in the film. All of us accept and turn on the video-camera when we went to sleep.
Suddenly, while we were sleeping, some weird noises woke me up. It was such as someone was throwing things on the floor, I was very horrified.
In the morning when I told them what happened at night, they didn’t believe me. We played the video and we saw a spooky shadow moving across the room, throwing things on the floor, so scary. We leaved that house quailing and quaking and never went back.
Last year my friends and I decided to go to a Halloween party in Alcoi. When we arrived we were really hungry so we went to order some pizzas. When we finished in the restaurant We thought it was high time to go to dance.
ResponderEliminarWe moved to the most famous square in Alcoi where young people use to go for having fun. Everyone was dress up with Halloween costumes and the majority of them were really terrifying. I had a lot of fun with my friends in that club but we didn´t know what was awaiting for us.
We were tired of being in that club so we thought it was time to go home. I was driving for a desert road and my friends were singing but suddenly something really shocking happened to us. All of a sudden a car appeared next to our car and the driver and the other people started doing strange things. All of them were wearing a white mask and black clothes.
They wanted to block our way and made us feel frightened and they got it. At a point some of them went off the car and they started trembling. One of them came toward me and he told me to come down the window. I was scared to death.
Fortunately they went again into the car and we quickly moved into a different road.
The next morning we met up for a coffee and we talked about what happened. In that moment we laugh a lot but we recognized that we were really scared while it was happening.
JÉSIKA SÁNCHEZ BONETE
ResponderEliminarA GLOOMY HOUSE
This happened when Laura and her friends were 15 and they embarked on a dangerous adventure. Laura, Rose, Jan and Martin were walking through a menacing and glommy forest when they heard clanking sounds in the distance. The four friends were transfixed because the noises were very strong.
They realized that there was an intimidating house very close to them, at the bottom there was a tenebrous valley. Laura said she wanted to go investigate this house so spooky. They ran to the house and entered because the door was open.
The living room was pitch black. Laura stared at a picture of the hall. She couldn’t believe that she was seeing, she appeared in the picture. Suddenly, she shouted and her friends were quivering because Laura disappeared.
Without thinking, the three friends decided to go to the top of the house, they were apalled by the strange fact. As they went upstairs, Martin turned and realized that Rose and Jan weren’t behind him. They had also disappeared. Martin was panic-stricken. He was quickly down the stairs and left the house. Martin managed to escape. He never again saw his three friends and always had the same nightmare: a ghost chasing him into a dark house.
PAMELA PASCUAL CANO
ResponderEliminarWhen I was little, I lived with my parents in the countryside. At that time, we weren't so connected to the technology as it's now, the mobile phones didnt' exist.
One morning, while I was sleeping alone at home, a strange noise startled me. The sound came from the garage. I couldn't warn my parents because they were working in the village. I listened to unintelligible sound that produced an echo in my room. I jumped out of bed and I opened the shutter. It was a dreazy day so at first I didn't see anything but then I realised a person was running towards the front door. I was frightened and petrified but I didn't Know what to do so I started to scream.
Afterwards, my older brother arrived home and he was shocked about my story. He was concerned about the affair and tried to calm my nerves. I cursed the odd person but.....horrified things began to happen!!!
The next morning appeared a dead cat there, another day I saw a second dead cat. I didn't know what was happening!! it would be a dream? it would be true? it would have connection between the cases?....
PAULA MARIN GASCON
ResponderEliminarThis happened the last Halloween’s night. I was in a party with my friends and at about midnight I decided to go back home. I was driving my car in the dark night when I had to stop at a pedestrian crossing. A blonde young girl was crossing the street. Suddenly, when she was in front of my car, she turned and she stared at me for two or three minutes, so I could see her red eyes and her face which was as white as a ghost.
After that I continued driving to my home, but when I was trying to close the curtains in my bedroom, I saw the young girl in my garden and she was staring at me again. This bizarre situation sent me chills down one’s spine.
I couldn’t sleep that night because I was so horrified, but when I got it, I felt a cold hand touched my face so I woke up quickly and the young girl was staring at me again and she said me with a sibilant voice: “You should remind me every Halloween’s night, because if you don’t do it, I’ll return to take you with me”. Firstly I was appalled, but in a few seconds later, I started to shake like a leaf and I broke into cold sweat at the same time.
Next morning, I wanted to think that it had been a nightmare but when I read the newspaper my mind changed. One of my neighbours had died that night and he had found with a photo of the young blonde girl near him. All my body was transfixed. It had been true.
For this reason, I have a promise to do every Halloween’s night.
All of us have ever looked under the bed to check there wasn’t a monster. But...what would you do if someday there were something under the bed?
ResponderEliminarEverything happened on a full moon night. He was eight years and, as every night, he wanted to make sure that there was nothing. But it wasn’t like that. Two big red eyes appeared in the darkness and with them a strong sulphur smell. The child, terrified, jumped onto the bed and saw a huge hand covered with a black hair and with long and sharp nails like a knife. That creature was huge, as it had been born in hell. Suddenly, the bedroom’s temperature increased. It was boiling!!
The black hairy beast catched him by the neck and started to throttle him. The child’s face became red while he was trying to scape, but it was impossible to do so. A few seconds later, the child’s face exploded, and the bedroom filled with blood. Then, the monster started to eat the child’s body with his giant mouth, tearing his flesh and scrunching his bones. When he finished eating him, he was going to go to fathers’ bedroom to eat them, but just at that moment the alarm clock rang.
Everything had been a nightmare.
__________________________________________________________________MIGUEL GIMENO FERRANDO (B2.1, G31)
Far away, in a lost village there were a couple walking around the countryside. Suddenly, they found a house that had an spooky appearence, but they werent afraid of anything and they decided going into the house. When they opened the door an old pirate who was the houskeeper wanted to show them the horrifying place where he lived... The adventure had just begun and they walked over the corridors, it was cold there... spiders and their cobwebs decorated the walls of the house, there was a man with a knife in his hand that want to kill them, he was crazy and soon he desapeared... after that, ghost of men and women where walking around the house, even, there was a prison in the house where a man was clanking with a stone and he claimed to go out.... Suddenly they realised that there were more people like them, trying to go out of that awful house, they ran over the corridors trying to escape... finally they saw the light and they could go out... it was an horrifying experience but they was excited about everything that had happened there.... in fact, if you ask them if they returned to that house, they would take the risk another time because it was only the horror house of an amusement park.
ResponderEliminarInma Ramos Molla (B2.1)
This happened when Laura and her friends were 15 and they embarked on a dangerous adventure. Laura, Rose, Jan and Martin were walking through a menacing and glommy forest when they heard clanking sounds in the distance. The four friends were transfixed because the noises were very strong.
ResponderEliminarThey realized that there was an intimidating house very close to them, at the bottom there was a tenebrous valley. Laura said she wanted to go investigate this house so spooky. They ran to the house and entered because the door was open.
The living room was pitch black. Laura stared at a picture of the hall. She couldn’t believe that she was seeing, she appeared in the picture. Suddenly, she shouted and her friends were quivering because Laura disappeared.
Without thinking, the three friends decided to go to the top of the house, they were apalled by the strange fact. As they went upstairs, Martin turned and realized that Rose and Jan weren’t behind him. They had also disappeared. Martin was panic-stricken. He was quickly down the stairs and left the house. Martin managed to escape. He never again saw his three friends and always had the same nightmare: a ghost chasing him into a dark house.
Jésika Sánchez Bonete B2.1(31)
This story is a weird thing that happened in my house, which is 33 years old.
ResponderEliminarIn the small bathroom which is near the hall, when I switched on the light from the hall a shadow silhouette like a three fingers appeared in one of the walls in the bathroom.
Since I saw it the first time I've tried to discover why this shadow appeared on the wall. I've changed the direction of the light or removed every object in the bathroom and in the wall to get the shadow disappeared, but I`ve never got it. As I'm a frightened person, I tried to forget the shadow a few years ago because I've never told it anybody.
However, I'll never discovered it because the last summer my parents have built a new bathrooms and in the new it the shadow doesn't exist, and of course, now I don't tell it anybody because they could think that I'm lying or something worse.
Lidia Pla Albuixech B2.1 G. 30
Two Friends drove outside of town to talk and be alone. They parked their car near a small village . They were listening the radio but suddenly the news come on the radio and said that there was a crazy man who had escaped from prison. His hand has been cut in an accident and now he has a hook for a hand.
ResponderEliminarThe two friends were very scared and decided to drive at home. When they started driving the car, they hear a noise on the car door . They thought that it would be a tree.
When they arrived at home, the driver opened his door and go out of the car. His friend come out to see what was happened. There, on the car door was a hook, covered in blood. The friends fled and they never talked about what it has happened.
A few years ago, I was driving in a moonless dark night through a small road. There were no traffic lights nor any source of light but my car lights.
ResponderEliminarArround half past four in the morning I saw a little girl by the side of the road. I though it was the 'girl of the curve' or someone in need of help so i stopped my car the moment I saw a parking spot and run back with the only light coming from my mobile phone screen. I found out the little spirit I though I have seen was only a plastic white bag shaped like a dress by the bushes It was on and the wind moving it.
Dissapinted with the time loss I turned back to my car to find out there was no car to be found!!! I panicked and I thought the car could have been stolen or even that It had fallen off the road!!! I was about to descend through the bushes to look for my car when suddently another car came throught the road. Then I realized the new car came from the wrong direcction and that I have travelled in the opposite direction.
It truly was a scary night.
David González Calvo B2.1 Group 30.
Few days ago, one friend and i went to my grandmother’s farm to prepare our friends a Halloween’s party.
ResponderEliminarIt was a dreary day and inside the farmhouse it seems to be a little colder than it should be.
At night, while all our friends were arriving, one of them seems to be pretty uncomfortable the whole time. During the dinner, his eyes were incredibly opened most of the time.
I decided speak with him because his reaction was scaring me. Whispering he told me he had seen a woman through the window looking at us.
I’m skeptical so I couldn’t believe him. After that he left home.
At midnight all of us heard unintelligible sounds outside and some of us looked out the window, but everything was pitch black and it was impossible seeing something.
Ten minutes later another friend of mine turned as white as a ghost. Suddenly I had goose bumps remembering my friend’s reaction hours ago.
It started pouring and people were aghast.
The woman was in the window again and all of us could see her. We jump out of skin and one minute after that, lights turn off and everyone started creaming very loud.
When lights turn on, David wasn’t there, we were worried and appalled.
One hour later we found David collapsed on the ground outside. As soon as he came round all we left the farm and I’ve never gone again.
Now I understand why my parents were loath with the idea of doing the party there. I wish I never have chosen this place.
Iris L.
The radio programme
ResponderEliminarA young couple, David and Carla, and their beautiful little baby Martha decided to spend a relaxed weekend in a cottage at the Halloween weekend.
When they arrived, David went to the village to buy some things, Carla and her daughter were alone in the house.
Carla was listening to a radio programme while she cooked dinner. The announcer said: “Dear listeners, welcome to a new programme at this particular night. Do you believe in paranormal activities, in ghosts…? Mmm, I don’t recommend you to listen to it, but those who want to continue so it won’t be my fault what happens to them…”
The speaker continued: “Are you sure that you are alone at home? Can you, listen to that noise and that singing? And a baby crying?
Carla was very scared stiff, she ran to the baby’s room but everything was quiet and Martha was sleeping. Suddenly, the light went out. Carla heard a tenebrous woman’s voice singing a lullaby. It sends chills down her spine. Carla could turn the light on. Then she saw that her baby was lying on the floor tragically dead and covered in blood. Carla screamed terrified. The radio speaker continued saying: “You are sad, I know .Be quite Carla, the upsetter you are, the faster you’ll die. Bye!!”
When David got to the cottage, he met this hair-raisin scene: the Carla and Martha’s bloodstained bodies on the floor. He was petrified. A voice coming to the radio said: “Look back …, you are going with your family, good riddance David! Bye!!”
Did you like this story?... I’m the announcer…Bye!!
Inma Ezpeleta ( B2- 1º Group 31)
Good night guys!!
ResponderEliminarFirst of all, I want to introduce you in the context of this story. It happened fifteen years ago, when I was a scrawny child. It was Halloween, and it was the first time my family and me visited that icy town.
We were there to know about Aunt Mary inheritance. Aunt Mary was an old maid who lived alone in that house. She had died three months before, and my father was the only one heir.
When we go into that house, we observed that dusty house, with an old carpeted staircase. On the top of the stairs there was an old picture with the portrait of Aunt Mary. It seemed a gloomy house with that antiquated furniture.
I spent all the afternoon sifting through our new old house. I found a couple of wardrobes full of tatters, a cape and a broom. It was terrifying, I was frightened. That night I couldn´t sleep because I was thinking about our enchanted house and Aunt Mary. She was a witch. Wow!!
Nico Hostalet B2.1 G.31
Hi guys! I’m going to tell my story just on time!
ResponderEliminarThis weird story happened to me some years ago on the beach at midnight in the end of May. The weather was really good that night, so a friend and I decided to go there to have fun, talk and relax.
Nobody else was there and we went for a walk near the river mouth. From the last building of the beach to arrive there, there are 500 meters of distance more or less. Obviously, everything was dark.
When we were walking, we heard a dog barking near us and we saw as well a shade which looked like a big dog or something like that, running towards us in front of us, so we got scared and I took her hand suddenly to start to run on the sand on the contrary direction to leave the beach the faster, the better, like in a film. I had never been so scared!
Finally, we got to leave the beach without seeing behind. When we arrived to the seafront, we saw and heard nothing. Nowadays, I still wonder if that shadow was a dog or a ghost, but We saw and heard the same :D
Everything happened a dark and cold winter night.
ResponderEliminarA girl called Anne was heading home from a friend, Nate.
They used to meet once a week to speak about their lives. That night, the meeting touched in his house.
She lived in a little village and he also, but he lived in a small cottage a few km from the village. His house was inside the great forest.
That night, the forest seemed like as a tenebrous valley. It started making a lot of hazy air, rain... She didn’t see through the window.
Suddenly, a clanking sound was heard.
Anne, a little horrified got out seeing what had happened. Lamentably, the car had collided with a wild boar. The car was good and she went on the road.
10 minutes later, she saw another car chased... It was very strange. Who would go into the forest at that hour of the night a day like today? Anne thought. His head began to think, to spin on the question. She increased the speed, but the other car too. Were they following her? She was very appalled, she had panic... At that moment, she came home from Nate. She started banging on the door, shouting, ringing the bell... by nobody answered.
The other car stood in the parking house.
She was paralyzed and at the same moment she was trembling. The situation was creepy. Droplets of sweat began to slide on her forehead... She didn’t want to look back. She just heard footsteps coming toward her, and getting faster. But surprise, a familiar voice said: what happen Anne? Why you are shaking, banging on my door...? At that moment, she saw Nate and gave him a bug hug.
How witless she had been!
She told him what had happened.
Sometimes our mind plays dirty.
Ana Ballester
EliminarA few years ago, at a gloomy night, one child stayed in his grandmother's house, an old and creepy house.
ResponderEliminarWhen it was ten o'clock, he went to bedroom to sleep. Suddenly, when he was into the bed asleep, he could smell a strange smell. It was a really rancid smell!!
After that, he heard a clanking and unintelligible sound to the pitch black. He opened his eyes slowly. He could'nt believe it! he saw horror-stricken a ghost. It couldn't be true, he was aghast at ghost and panic-stricken but it saw it again.
Oh! the ghost was his grandfather, who had died a few days ago. He was trembling and he left the bedroom fastly to see his family.
When he told it to his parents and grandmother, they went to the bedroom fastly and there was nobody there but everybody could feel smell the rancid smell. And you? Can you feel smell the ghost?
Halloween's story
ResponderEliminarA young man and his wife were on a trip to visit his mother.Suddenly it was getting dark so they decided to look for a place to stay overnight and go on in the morning.
Just then, they saw a small house on the road and so they stopped to ask if they rented rooms.An elderly man and his woman opened the door.They didn't rent rooms but they would be pleased to have them as their guests.
The old woman made coffee, brough some cake and they talked for a while. Then the young couple wanted to pay for they room but the old man said he would not accept any money.
The young couple got up early the next morning before their hosts had woken up. They left a backege with some money on a bedside table for the room.
They went on the trip.In the next town they stopped in a restaurant and had breakfast.When they told the owner where they had stayed he was shocked. “That can't be”he said. “That house burned ten years ago, the old man and his wife who lived there died in the fire”.
The young people could not believe it so they went back to the house.All was burned-out.There was no house.Now that pace looked menacing.They stood staring at the ruins trying to understand what had happened.
Suddenly the woman started crying.Her knees were knocking.In the rubbish was a badly burned table with the package which they had left there that morning.They felt shuddering!
Inma Garcia 1 B2 group30
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ResponderEliminarThis story happened five years ago in Canals. My girlfriend told me that a friend called Alba had a house with a ghost living there. She told us that the ghost was her aunt, who died some years ago. She was used to live several weird situations. I think she had moody anecdotes during her life.
ResponderEliminarOne day, every friends went to Alba´s house to celebrate her birthday. When everyone was eating the cake, a boy called Marc who was Maria´s boyfriend, told us that he was sceptical. Suddenly, he started crying. We felt a chill, and then we asked him why he was crying. He asked Alba: Is your aunt the picture from these table? And Alba said: yes, of course. After that Marc started screaming and running. Everyone was terrified and we went outside the house to look for Marc. We found him in his car. We asked him why he ran away. He told us that the picture was seeing him fixedly and he felt very scared. After that Marc isn´t completly sceptical with ghosts and other paranormal situations.
J. M. Moscardó
It was a Halloween’s night. A girl was driving along of an abandoned and somber road while she headed for a party. Suddenly, her car began to throw a lot of smoke but she could continue driving to the nearer town.
ResponderEliminarIt was midnight and the town was brilliantly lit by a full moon and there were a sepulchral silence on the street. She thought that she should spend the night in a hotel and the next morning she will look for a mechanic.
She found only a hotel. It was gloomy and intimidating. The door opened without having rung the bell. All of a sudden an uncanny man appeared. He had a drawn haggard look and a steely voice. She asked for a room and he said to her that all were free. Later, the strange man gave a key to her.
After she saw the bedroom, her body shuddered and she had shivers of fears. It was pitch black, the furniture was very old and there were some spider webs. She couldn’t believe it! However, she went to the bed and she turned off the light. In the middle of the darkness she began to hear some strange clanking sounds and whispers cries. She was very horrified! Later, she heard some steps in the room. Immediately she turned on the light but there weren’t anybody else there. She tried to sleep but obviously, she couldn’t.
Next morning, she got up and she went directly to the hall but no one came up. Then, she called a mechanic by her mobile phone. When the man arrived there, he told her that on the Halloween’s night all the cars broke down while they went through this road. Besides, it was a ghost town and it was unoccupied a lot of years ago because there always had happened strange things. At that time, she realized that she had been in a haunted hotel and what she had seen and she had heard were ghosts. She was very scared about this!
Some days later, a newspaper published her creepy story.
Halloween story
ResponderEliminarLast summer a terrifying night took place in our creepy house. All this began at 10 in the evening, just after dinner while I was with my cousins watching a movie in the living room of the house. The creepy house that we have on the outskirts of the city which is surrounded by mountains and pine trees.
Then, while we were so calm quickly change time and we started to notice a little hazy air throughout the room and an amorphous creature. We face petrified and panic-stricken, continue as calmly watching film... Few seconds later, one of my cousins said I saw a man go right out the window with a black color and a feather hat. I, before this event, I got scared and witless a lot, and I told them we are going to close all the windows just in case. The rest of my cousins did not feel any fear, until that man returned to appear after the window of the creepy house and we noticed an unintelligible sound. It was very scary!
The next day, was published in the local newspaper, the disappearance of a man...
Marta Palacín Fito
Gosh!! what a spooky story!
Eliminarthanks a lot
-the WEATHER CHANGED QUICKLY...
-We WERE petrified
-A few seconds later,
- One of my cousins said THAT HE HAD SEEN a man....
- I told them we WERE GOING to close....
-until that man returned to appear JUST BEHIND the window...
-THE DISAPPEARANCE OF A MAN was published...
This happened when I was about ten years old. While my father underwent surgery in the hospital, my brother and I slept in our grandparent's house during a week.
ResponderEliminarThe house was a typical old house of a village with two floors and wooden structure. On the first floor there were two bedrooms, where our uncles had slept before they married, a loft with a lot of old things and a terrace.
It was our first night, a cold winter night, it was raining and windy. We was in two beds in the same bedroom, under two blankets and whispering between us between a bit tenebrous atmosphere. Noises flooded our thoughts. We heard a strong noise like a wooden window closed. After that, something run through the loft. We were scared and didn't want to go out. During all night we wished our grandmother would go up to wake up us. We couldn't alert our grandmother, if we had screamed she wouldn't have heard and maybe we would have discover our presence in the bedroom. Then we did nothing, only tembling of fear.
At the next morning when our grandmother woke up us, we discovered that was a pregnant female cat who gave birth in the loft.
Francisco Cháfer. B2.1, Group 30.
in the end, everything went fine, didn't it?
Eliminarthanks a lot.
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just some mistake to check:
-FOR a week.
-we WERE in two beds..
-after that, something RAN through....
-we wished our grandmother to go up and wake US up.
-... and maybe we WOULD HAVE DISCOVERED our presence.....
-only TREMBLING WITH fear.
-NEXT morning.......... we FOUND OUT that THERE WAS a pregnant female cat GIVING birth....
Esther Garcia Veses
ResponderEliminarThis happened one day in the middle of the night, I was in my house seeing a very funny film when I felt a chilling feeling. I breathed deeply and I tried to relax me… Later, I again felt a chill and I realized it was late. I saw a black shadow close to me and I, unthinkingly, I started running, and the shadow was following me. There was nobody on the street, I started shouting, my legs were knocking and I knocked on the door of a house, the door was opened and I went into the house. I hid under the bed, I caught my phone and I phoned the police, when the police answered I started to cry and I said them that I was in danger, then, I listened a noise, the shadow was in the room and when I turned around, the shadow was over me. I started shouting and the shadow caught me. When I woke up I was in my bed, all seemed normally, but I felt a strange feeling inside of me, now the shadow was inside of me.
I wouldn't like to be in your shoes, Esther!
Eliminarthanks
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just a few mistakes:
- I tried to relax MYSELF.
-When the police answered, I started to cry and I said TO them...
-I HEARD a noise.
-I felt a strange feeling inside me.
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ResponderEliminarSome year ago, my friends and I came back home by car. While I was driving, the rest of my friends slept. I was listening to the radio, when the program Milenio 3 started and Iker Jiménez told us a spooky story.
ResponderEliminarThe story happened in the 70s. A group of students had come back from the Easter holidays. They had enjoyed some days in Madrid. Around 50 people travelled in the bus, among them children and teachers. Halfway, they stopped to have dinner. When they finished, they continued the journey. Ten minutes later, the driver lost control of the bus and the bus fell into the river. Some children fought to survive but only 12 of them did. The rest died, some of them getting stuck inside the bus. After a few days, the bodies were rescued. The accident was a tragedy.
The most surprising thing are the stories that the people tell. There is a story that tells what happened to one family. They were camping near the river, the women were sleeping in the caravan and the father and his son were sleeping in the tent. Suddenly, at midnight, the women were surprised by a knocks on the caravan. They cried very loud because they wanted to get out of the caravan, but the father and the son didn’t hear anything. After some minutes the knocks stopped and they could leave and ask for help. They saw that there were footprints the size of a child in the caravan which were black in colour, as the ashes. They remained a lot of time on the caravan. Other people said to have heard voices when they camped here.
Patri Mollà. Group 30
Very true Patricia!
Eliminarthanks a lot for your contribution
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-this is a story THAT HAPPENED to a family.
- surprised by KNOCKS on the caravan.
-they cried very LOUDLY...
This story is true, one time an old woman told me five years ago.
ResponderEliminarShe told me that during all life, she had felt afraid "the night of All Saint´s Day".When she was a child, she always lived with her parents and her sister in a country house and when arrive that day she was afraid, she was nervous and frigtened.
After years, she got married and her husband was seriously ill and he died the night os Saint´s Day.
The years passed, an one night of All Saint´s Days, she was sleeping when she heard a strange noisy at midnight, it was her sewing machine which had started to work. She was very scared stilf.Suddenly, she got up very fast and switched off it. She never understood that, Why was her sewing machine working alone? She always hated this day
So scary!!
Eliminarthanks
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Just some mistakes to check:
- she told me that ALL OF HER LIFE...
- and WHENEVER THE DAY ARRIVED.....she was afraid, nervous and FRIGHTENED.
-She was SCARED STIFF..
-suddenly.. she got up very fast and SWTICHED IT OFF.
-she WOULD ALWAYS HATE this day.
This is the story of something that happened to me when I was about 13.
ResponderEliminarMy grandparents lived in a big and old house in a small town near Xátiva. One Monday morning my grandpa died after a long illness, after that, my grandma didn’t want to sleep herself in such a big house, so the family decided that I were to sleep there.
One rainy night, my grandma and I were sleeping when suddenly I woke up absolutely petrified, I heard some strange clanking sounds upstairs, after a while, they stopped but soon they started again, I had droplets of sweat on my forehead, quickly I got up appalled and went to look for my grandma who was sleeping in the room next door. She had also heard that noise, the truth was that we were terribly frightened, that is why we didn’t want to go upstairs to see what was that, we just closed the bolt and tried to sleep but this time both of us in the same bedroom.
Next morning when my mum came, we discussed about what had happened and in the end we decided to go upstairs to check it, but the only thing we saw outside its place, it was my grandpa’s bike and his cap. He wanted to remember old times or maybe he wanted to tell us something.… Who knows?
Mª Teresa Bataller - Grupo 30
yeah! Absolutely.
ResponderEliminarGood job, Teresa!
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a couple of mistakes to check:
- in a BIG OLD HOUSE...
-..the only thing we saw outside HER place WAS my grandpa's bike and cap.